Kujua kwamba impact ina maana ya athari hakuhakikishi utaandika have an impact on kwa usahihi. Katika LetsWords, unaandika sentensi yenye neno unalojifunza. Ukaguzi unaonyesha kinachokwaza maana: muunganiko wa maneno, kihusishi, muundo au umbo la neno. Unapata toleo lililorekebishwa na sababu ya marekebisho, kisha unaweza kuitumia katika jaribio linalofuata.
Hapa kuna ukaguzi 12 halisi wa LetsWords wa maneno yanayotumika katika mazungumzo, barua pepe na IELTS Writing. Mifano ya kwanza ina makosa. Miwili ya mwisho tayari ni sahihi, lakini inaonyesha tofauti kati ya kusahihisha kosa na kuendeleza wazo.
Unapata nini baada ya ukaguzi?
Kila mfano una sentensi ya awali, jibu la LetsWords na namna maelezo yanavyosaidia kujifunza. Hapa maelezo, yanayotolewa kwa lugha yako ya mama, yamesimuliwa upya badala ya kunukuliwa neno kwa neno. Maoni ya kina yanapatikana unapojifunza neno na unapolirudia.
Marekebisho huondoa kosa; pendekezo la kuandika kwa namna nyingine huonyesha njia nyingine ya kufikisha wazo. Hayo ni mambo mawili tofauti. Sentensi sahihi haigeuki kuwa kosa kwa sababu inaweza kuongezewa maelezo. Ukaguzi pia huzingatia lengo lililochaguliwa. Mifano ya mtihani hapa ilikaguliwa kwa IELTS Academic Writing yenye lengo la 7.0; barua pepe ya kazi na sentensi kuhusu maendeleo zilikaguliwa kwa Kiingereza cha jumla cha B2.
1. Impact: makosa mawili yanayozunguka neno unalolijua
Kilichoandikwa:
The new transport policy did a significant impact to air quality in the city.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Muunganiko unaohitajika ni have an impact on. Katika wakati uliopita, kitenzi ni had, na kinachoathiriwa kinafuata on. Ukaguzi unarekebisha sehemu zote mbili: did → had, to → on.
Marekebisho:
The new transport policy had a significant impact on air quality in the city.
Faida ya maelezo. Kujua maana ya impact hakukuonyeshi kitenzi na kihusishi vinavyoendana nayo. Hapa, marekebisho yanahifadhi hoja ya sera ya usafiri huku yakitengeneza muunganiko kamili. Unajifunza have an impact on kama kitengo cha kutumia katika mada za mazingira, elimu au teknolojia.
Jaribu maelezo ya makosa ya LetsWords
Unaposajiliwa, chagua lengo na kiwango, kisha ujaribu zoezi la kuandika lenye maoni kabla ya kulipa.
2. Suggest: maana inafaa, muundo hauendani nayo
Kilichoandikwa:
My tutor suggested me to compare the two views before giving my opinion.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Suggest haitumii muundo wa me to katika maana hii. Badala ya suggest someone to do, unaweza kutaja kitendo kwa umbo la -ing: suggested comparing.
Marekebisho:
My tutor suggested comparing the two views before giving my opinion.
Pendekezo jingine la LetsWords:
My tutor suggested that I compare the two perspectives before expressing my own view.
Faida ya maelezo. Unaona miundo miwili inayofaa: suggest doing wakati kutaja kitendo kunatosha, na suggest that someone do wakati unahitaji kubainisha anayefanya, kama suggested that I compare. Miundo yote inaweza kusaidia unapopendekeza jambo katika barua pepe au insha. Imeelezwa katika mwongozo wa sarufi wa Cambridge.
3. Adopt: anza utaratibu mpya bila kuchanganya vitenzi
Kilichoandikwa:
Students need to adopt to a new routine when they start university.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Adopt haihitaji kihusishi hapa. Adopt a new routine ni kuanza kufuata utaratibu mpya.
Marekebisho:
Students need to adopt a new routine when they start university.
Faida ya maelezo. Adopt na adapt zinafanana kwa maandishi lakini si maana. Adopt a routine ni kuukubali na kuanza kuufuata; adapt to a routine ni kuuzoea. LetsWords imehifadhi kitenzi kinachofanyiwa mazoezi, adopt, na kuonyesha namna ya kukitumia. Unajifunza muundo wa neno ulilokusudia badala ya kulibadilishiwa tu.
4. Look forward to: kosa katika barua pepe ya kawaida
Kilichoandikwa:
I look forward to hear from you about the interview.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Katika look forward to, to ni kihusishi, hivyo kitendo kinachofuata hutumia -ing: hearing, si hear. Muundo huo huo upo katika look forward to meeting, look forward to working na look forward to seeing.
Marekebisho:
I look forward to hearing from you about the interview.
Faida ya maelezo. Unaelewa sababu ya -ing, hivyo unaweza kutumia muundo huo katika ujumbe kuhusu mkutano, kufanya kazi pamoja au simu ya kufuatilia. Mafunzo hayahusu mstari huu mmoja tu. Maana na mfano mwingine vipo katika zoezi la look forward to.
5. Evidence: kurekebisha muundo mzima
Kilichoandikwa:
There are many evidences that regular exercise improves mental health.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Katika maana ya ushahidi, evidence haihesabiki. Haina -s, na kitenzi kinakuwa cha umoja. Tumia there is, pamoja na much evidence au a lot of evidence, si many evidences.
Marekebisho:
There is much evidence that regular exercise improves mental health.
Pendekezo jingine la LetsWords:
Substantial evidence indicates that regular exercise improves mental health.
Faida ya maelezo. Kuondoa -s pekee hakutoshi. Kitenzi na neno la kiasi pia vinahitaji kuendana na nomino isiyohesabika. LetsWords imerekebisha mnyororo wote, kisha kutoa toleo fupi zaidi linalofaa katika maandishi ya kitaaluma. Unajifunza pia namna ya kuanzisha ushahidi katika IELTS Writing.
6. Despite: kiunganishi hakifuti tatizo la sarufi
Kilichoandikwa:
Despite the government invested in public transport, traffic congestion continued to increase.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Despite haiwezi kufuatiwa moja kwa moja na the government invested. Hapa unahitaji despite the government’s investment. Njia nyingine ni although the government invested.
Marekebisho:
Despite the government’s investment in public transport, traffic congestion continued to increase.
Faida ya maelezo. Hoja yako ni kuonyesha tofauti kati ya matarajio na matokeo: fedha ziliwekezwa, lakini foleni ikaendelea kuongezeka. Marekebisho yanahifadhi hoja hiyo na kutengeneza muundo baada ya despite. Unajifunza kiunganishi ulichotaka kutumia badala ya kupewa kingine rahisi bila sababu. British Council inaeleza tofauti kati ya despite na although.
7. Contribute: neno la kitaaluma bado linahitaji muundo
Kilichoandikwa:
Poor public transport contributes to increase traffic congestion.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Katika contribute to, to ni kihusishi. Kitendo kinachofuata kinahitaji -ing: contributes to increasing, si to increase.
Marekebisho:
Poor public transport contributes to increasing traffic congestion.
Faida ya maelezo. Unafanya mazoezi ya contribute to doing. Muundo huo unaeleza kinachochangia tatizo badala ya kulitaja tu. Unaweza kuutumia katika mada nyingine: contribute to reducing emissions au contribute to improving public health.
8. Affect: kihusishi kinachoonekana kufaa lakini hakihitajiki
Kilichoandikwa:
Air pollution can negatively affect on the health of children.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Affect hutaja kinachoathiriwa moja kwa moja: affect the health of children, si affect on.
Marekebisho:
Air pollution can negatively affect the health of children.
Faida ya maelezo. Nomino zenye maana inayokaribiana hutumia on: an effect on, an influence on na have an impact on kutoka mfano wa kwanza. Ndiyo sababu ni rahisi kuchanganya miundo na kuandika affect on. Kitenzi affect hakihitaji kihusishi hicho. Kujua tafsiri ya neno pekee hakutoshi kutenganisha miundo hiyo miwili.
9. Progress: kitenzi kinachofaa ni make
Kilichoandikwa:
I have done a lot of progress in English since I started practising every day.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Progress katika muunganiko huu hutumia make, si do: make a lot of progress.
Marekebisho:
I have made a lot of progress in English since I started practising every day.
Faida ya maelezo. Maneno yote yanafahamika na wazo liko wazi, lakini muunganiko bado unakosea. LetsWords inarekebisha sehemu hiyo bila kulazimisha kuandika upya simulizi lote. Unapata usemi wa kueleza maendeleo katika masomo, mradi au mafunzo. Uufanyie mazoezi katika make progress.
10. Significant increase: usahihi katika maelezo ya chati
Kilichoandikwa:
The chart shows a significant increase of the number of commuters between 2010 and 2020.
LetsWords: makosa yamepatikana. Unapotaja kilichoongezeka, tumia in: an increase in the number of commuters. Of hutangulia kiasi cha ongezeko: an increase of 20%.
Marekebisho:
The chart shows a significant increase in the number of commuters between 2010 and 2020.
Faida ya maelezo. Significant tayari inafaa; hakuna haja ya kuibadilisha na neno la kuvutia zaidi. Marekebisho yanahusu muundo ulio karibu nayo huku yakihifadhi kipindi na kipimo kinachoelezwa. Unafanya mazoezi ya msamiati wa Task 1 katika sentensi kabla ya kuandika maelezo kamili ya chati.
11. Mitigate: kupunguza athari si kumaliza tatizo
Kilichoandikwa:
Investing in flood defences can mitigate the effects of climate change on coastal communities.
LetsWords: sahihi. Hakuna kosa: neno lina maana inayofaa, muundo ni sahihi na mtindo unaendana na insha ya kitaaluma.
Faida ya maelezo. Kinga dhidi ya mafuriko haisimamishi mabadiliko ya tabianchi, lakini inaweza kupunguza athari kwa jamii za pwani. Hicho ndicho mitigate the effects kinaeleza. LetsWords inakubali matumizi sahihi bila kudai neno tofauti au sarufi ngumu zaidi. Unajifunza kuchagua msamiati kwa maana: hapa ni kupunguza ukali wa athari, bila kuahidi kumaliza chanzo cha tatizo.
12. Play a role: usahihi na kuendeleza hoja
Kilichoandikwa:
Public libraries play a role in reducing digital exclusion.
LetsWords: sahihi. Hakuna kosa la msamiati au muundo.
Pendekezo jingine la LetsWords:
Public libraries play a vital role in reducing digital exclusion by providing free internet access, digital skills training, and support for disadvantaged communities.
Faida ya maelezo. Sentensi ya kwanza inasema maktaba zina mchango. Toleo lililopanuliwa linaonyesha namna: intaneti ya bure, mafunzo ya ujuzi wa kidijitali na msaada kwa jamii zinazohitaji. Huu ni mfano wa kuendeleza hoja katika IELTS Writing. Unaona cha kuongeza badala ya kuambiwa tu uweke maelezo zaidi.
Kutoka marekebisho moja hadi matumizi ya maneno
Katika kila mfano, kazi inaanza na jaribio la kuwasilisha wazo. LetsWords hulikagua, huonyesha marekebisho na sababu yake. Kisha marudio yenye nafasi kati yake hulirudisha neno katika vipindi vya baadaye: unalikumbuka na kuandika sentensi mpya. Muundo sahihi unaingia kwenye mazoezi badala ya kubaki ushauri uliousoma mara moja.
Unaweza kuanza na mikusanyiko iliyotayarishwa au kuongeza maneno kutoka usomaji, kazi na masomo. Ukikosa wazo la kuandika, zana ya mawazo inapendekeza hali kwa kiwango unachochagua, katika lugha yako ya mama. Kwa IELTS, mazoezi yanaendelea katika Writing, kutoka kifungu cha kigezo kimoja hadi jibu kamili lenye maoni.
Unaposajiliwa katika LetsWords, unachagua lengo na kiwango, kisha ujaribu zoezi la kuandika lenye maoni kabla ya kulipa.
Soma pia: mazoezi ya msamiati wa Kiingereza, msamiati wa IELTS kwa mada na mazoezi ya IELTS Writing.